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Sunday, 19 July 2015

"Promethean Sun" by Nick Kyme

As the release date of ‘Deathfire’ drew ever closer, what better way to prepare than by re-reading Nick Kyme’s Vulkan arc? So last month, that’s just what I did. The logical place to start was here: a study of Vulkan and his Legion during the days of the Great Crusade.

Promethean Sun. Beacuse it's burning and fiery, like so much about the Salamanders. Also, homophones - because Vulkan is a Promethean Son. Eh? Eh? Geddit?

This was also the first stand-alone novella published as a Limited Edition for the Horus Heresy. It’s a parallel with ‘Feat of Iron’, the Iron Hands story in ‘The Primarchs’. We find the Salamanders on Ibsen, or One-Five-Four Four, with Heka’tan (yes, of ‘Forgotten Sons’) leading a massed action against the eldar forces opposing the Imperium. Of course, Vulkan himself (he of the burning scary eyes and big sweeping hammer) makes an appearance just when things are getting really bad, turning the tide of the battle. It’s the cool-guy/saviour moment you’d expect in a Primarch story, of course, but it’s a little rote and predictable. Perhaps that’s because we’ve seen so many of those kind of moments… but damn, contrast this to the entrance of Horus in ‘Horus Rising’; that shit really made you feel the immensity of a Primarch in battle and how awesome it was just to be present for it.

While it zips along at a good pace, the beginning chapter is cliché-riddled bolter porn of the type we rarely get in the Heresy. I think Kyme has improved dramatically since he wrote this, but opening with a fairly dull action sequence is one of the quickest ways to kill my interest in a story. The language is really familiar from tens (maybe hundreds) of similar stories at this point. Naturally the Salamanders being what they are, massive overuse of both literal and metaphorical fire can be found in these pages. I wonder, is Nick Kyme’s writing frequently boring because he’s writing about dull fucking Salamanders, or are the Salamanders deeply dull because so much about their culture and method of warmaking has been set down by Nick Kyme? Sort of a chicken or the egg situation.

It’s when the combat stops, and characters are built on, that it gets a bit more interesting; Kyme’s got a certain way with dialogue which – while not sounding within a million miles of what a real human would ever say – certainly seems appropriate coming from a staid, slightly pompous Primarch like Vulkan. The Primarch’s interactions with his close Pyre Guard champion Numeon (who will play a prominent role in ‘Vulkan Lives’ and ‘Deathfire’) are a nice way to establish the strengths and weaknesses of Vulkan as a character. For example, unlike many of his brothers, Vulkan seems to freely admit his faults, most notable being a lack of the burning (heh) self-confidence some of his more wildly conceited peers have been blessed with. If – as is implied here – the Emperor is putting on his human suit to do spot-check inspections of Vulkan to check his attitudes, it says some potentially interesting things about both Vulkan and his father, as well as making one think, erm, could you maybe not have done this with some of your other sons? Or maybe this attentiveness is a marker for just how significant Vulkan will end up being (like I keep saying, I got my suspicions).

(Let me just make an aside here: the antagonists for most of this story are eldar mounted on dinosaurs. I don’t know if this is a regular thing, I admit to a lack of familiarity with eldar fluff… but that’s pretty cool. I might’ve continued to be interested in those stick-up-the-ass space elves if they’d been riding fucking dinosaurs about. Milking this scenario for all it’s worth, Kyme has some fun with some classic Jurassic Park moments. It's a nice touch in a series that can sometimes be guilty of overdosing on the Grim Darkness.)

However, this is a Nick Kyme book, and while I think homeboy has written some great stuff for Black Library, he’s also often guilty of dropping some colon-destroying howlers in his prose. ‘Promethean Sun’ is no different. I hate myself for doing this, but I’m gonna get my ‘Battle for the Abyss’ on and recount some of the more dodgy writing in this slim volume.

-“My strength is our strength, Numeon. We are one, the Legion and I.” Despite his inner feelings of estrangement, this much Vulkan knew to be true. Save perhaps Horus, who had his Mournival, all the Primarchs trod a solitary path. It was simply that the Primarch of the Salamanders felt it more acutely than his brothers.
Huh? Am I misreading, or does this start with an affirmation of Vulkan’s unity with his Legion, then go on to imply he’s actually the loneliest of all the Primarchs? It reads like Nick got bored halfway through the paragraph and lost the thread.

-In the middle of a battle, Vulkan sees a young child in danger of being crushed by a falling pillar and he rushes forward, “knowing that to even witness the death of such an innocent would forever stain his immortal soul.” Well,
1) nice ‘teaser’ allusion to his Eternal status, but it makes him sound like he’s Catholic rather than Promethean
2) the moment of “No! Save the kid!” is one of the hackiest, shallowest ways of getting a character to appear sympathetic, especially a character who is designed to straight murder dudes and does it with some frequency in the established fiction
3) furthermore, Vulkan sees another young child’s corpse earlier in the novel, killed in a battle he fought in, possibly even killed by warriors under his command – and the sight merely haunts him for “a moment”. No eternal soul-staining.

-"Lord Vulkan would see our wounded self-esteem restored in the tempering flame of the forge." Yeah, I’ve heard that forges are perhaps the best tool for repairing wounded self-esteem, next to a trip to Mardi Gras.

-"The hellish kaleidoscope of close combat was almost upon them." I did not realise the Salamanders dosed themselves with LSD before battle. That’s some hardcore shit.

-“'We should pursue them, Lord. Varrun and I can ensure they do not return’ he promised with a feral look.” A feral look? Homie, I don't play that, yo. A feral smile, maybe. Even a feral snarl. But a feral look? I picture a ‘feral look’ as the Salamander whooping, licking his lips and doing a ‘don’t you know I’m loco?’ glare with his eyes.

-Describing eldar witches who have ridden lightning (METALLICAAAA OOH YEAH) to the battleground: “They embarked to set foot on the earth as any man would step from a ship”. Splitting hairs, but that really should be disembarked, shouldn’t it – especially if you’re comparing it to stepping off a ship. Words matter. Editors know this.

-There are moments in this book which are certainly… videogamey. Look, tie-in fiction for videogames might not be my thing, but I recognise those as actual books. This, however, sometimes reads like a half-crazed novelisation of a Call of Duty match. Just a mad, tactics-free rush to kill some eldar nubz; I’m not normally the kind of reader who gets hung up on “those tactics would never work” issues in these books, but at times this seems more World Eaters than Salamanders. At moments, it feels more like Dynasty Warriors (large horde of weaker enemies? Just mow them down with your AOE attacks!) or God of War (huge version of a previous enemy as an actual boss battle), but I’m not crazy about those games either.

Ahh, I’m a complete dick. I’ll stop it now – but I do genuinely find the sloppy moments of Nick’s writing quite frustrating, especially since he is capable of writing really well. Enough about that though.

There is a brio and enthusiasm to parts of ‘Promethean Sun’ which I really admire. But its overuse of cliché, its combat-heavy structure and some rather dull characterisation makes me wary to endorse it as a worthwhile purchase for any but the most dedicated Heresy fan. As time goes on, it seems like the best place to find good writing about pre-Heresy Legion culture and the highlights of the Great Crusade is in Forge World’s books. As a result, Crusade stories like this seem a little clumsy, since the authors often seem dead-set on putting in as much foreshadowing for the Age of Darkness as possible. ‘Promethean Sun’ is better than ‘Scions of the Storm’ or ‘Wolf at the Door’, but it’s still far from an essential read. It’s no ‘Battle for the Abyss’, but it’s certainly closer to that much-maligned book than most other Heresy offerings. While I hesitate to condemn a book for an ‘inconsequential’ story – some of the best Heresy fiction has focused on events far from the frontlines which may have little effect on the wider conflict – this just doesn’t seem to add much to the series. To top it off, the text here is noticeably larger and more spaced-out than any other HH novella I’ve got. In fact, it wouldn’t surprise me if this was the smallest novella yet in word count.

If you’ve not yet purchased the hardback novella or ebook, you may as well hold off until it inevitably appears in a mainline Horus Heresy story compilation. 6/10

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Thursday, 7 May 2015

Yo, that Vulkan be spittin' that hot fire, son.

So after months of fucking nothing (beyond a fairly vague tweet from Nick Kyme), Heresy fans were given a treat yesterday...



Yes, book 32, the sequel to 'Vulkan Lives' and 'Unremembered Empire' is coming, in, like, two fuckin' months. AGES away! (Remember when we were told "Hey, by the way, we didn't mention it before but 'Unremembered Empire' is out this week!"? That seems a loooooong time ago now.) Ahh well, I guess it gives me time to read all Kyme's Heresy work again in preparation.

£25 is the price tag floated, so we can probably expect the hefty 500+ page count of 'A Thousand Sons', 'Vengeful Spirit' or 'Fear To Tread'. This could be a mixed blessing. 'Vulkan Lives' was average length but it felt drastically overlong and I really struggled to read it. But that was a book I read fresh off of reading the whole Heresy series for the first time. After the famine of 2015, I might be hungry enough for Nick's rather dry prose to seem a feast...

So, what will 'Deathfire' actually be about? From BL's website:

Vulkan lies in state beneath the Fortress of Hera, and yet many of his sons still refuse to believe that he is truly dead. After a seemingly miraculous rescue by the Ultramarines, Artellus Numeon, once captain of the Pyre Guard, urges the other Salamanders on Macragge to leave Imperium Secundus and return their primarch’s body to the home world of Nocturne – there to be reborn in the flames of Mount Deathfire. But Numeon grapples endlessly with his doubts and fears for the future of the Legion, while their foes seek to carve out new destinies of their own...

And from an email sent out from BL, with a slightly different synopsis:

In the wake of the cataclysmic events in The Unremembered Empire, Captain Numeon of the Pyre Guard experiences visions of Vulkan born anew in the furnaces of Mount Deathfire. An epic odyssey to Nocturne ensues. Beset by the Death Guard and Magnus the Red, can the Salamanders make it home through the Ruinstorm?

So we have a pretty good idea of what the setup will be, and I'm kind of confident that neither BL or Nick will throw us a curveball and have this be Vulkan's last voyage. No, this will most likely be a setup for his eventual return to Terra - well, if that's what they end up doing with the character (I got my suspicions). A corpse-carrying road-trip isn't necessarily a bad idea, and a small group of Salamanders defying Guilliman and going on a Viking-style quest for a borderline-impossible goal could be the framework for an excellent novel.

I anticipate that Vulkan will spend most (or all?) of the book as an inert corpse in a box, making Numeon our primary character. He wasn't always a character I felt massively engaged by, but the way his storyline was left hanging at the end of 'Vulkan Lives' always nagged at me, and now I guess we'll get closure, or as close as we can get in these books.

As for the Ultramarines... my bet is that Aeonid Thiel rescues Numeon - in fact, this would make a lot of sense as a topic for the apparently upcoming audio drama 'The Red-Marked', named for Thiel's unconventional group of Ultramarine guerrillas. That would be great, as I really like how Kyme writes him. And then, the return to Imperium Secundus; that'll give us some hints about how that story will progress, I hope, maybe even answer some of the annoying questions the last few stories set there have raised.

The Death Guard and Thousand Sons being the antagonists could be interesting, not least because I'd imagine they are almost as likely to kill each other as to kill some Salamander leftovers. I'm always keen on the Death Guard taking a prominent role in a Heresy novel, and Nick hasn't written them yet as far as I recall - so I'm quite intrigued to discover what his spin on them might be. As for the Sons, it'd be interesting to see what Nick would bring to that Legion too, and considering 'Crimson King' is probably up next, it could give some nice opportunities for some 'Prospero Burns' / 'Thousand Sons' split scenes, with the action playing out differently depending on the viewpoint character. Of course, the two factions may never interact, in fact, Magnus might just show up in magic ghost form and scream "NEW MIXTAPE DROPS 2015!" then disappear as everyone shits blood.

Concerns? Well, I don't know if more stories about Shattered Legion warriors "[grappling] endlessly with [their] doubts and fears" is really what the Heresy needs. In fact, we probably need a break from it. Salamanders doing it is probably going to be a bit more readable than yet more Iron Hands grinding their teeth about their moribund Legion, but... I dunno. I guess it could be an OK theme, if it's not one that 'Deathfire' doesn't lean on too much; the problem is I have little faith that Nick won't just run it into the ground.

And also... Numeon experiencing visions? I mean... is this going to be another 'awakened psyker' story? While I don't hate them as much as some Heresy fans seem to, I think we've maybe had enough of them for now - yet the idea of another character being granted visions by the Emperor also seems depressingly likely, as well.


I'm not sure I can really express how disappointed I am with this year's Heresy release schedule without coming across as a real whiner, but this goes some way to redressing the balance. Still, it does make me worry we might see only two Heresy novel releases this year - maybe just one, if Graham doesn't finish 'The Crimson King' in the next few months. I suppose it's unfair to complain - Black Library seem to be concerned with pushing the End Times series at the moment, and gods know those poor Warhammer Fantasy fans do need some attention, so it's good they're getting their due. I do feel a bit hard done by, though, especially when you consider the sheer volume of Heresy stuff that came out last year.

Ah well, the Warhammer World opening will probably give us a bit of a preview for the release schedule. I'm optimistic that 'The Red-Marked' is a likely audio release before 'Deathfire', and hopefully at least one HH novella to come out this summer... if nothing else, that Battle for Calth Forge World book is gonna be here soon.

AND WE OUT LIKE FULGRIM

Sunday, 17 August 2014

"Book Two: Massacre" (Forge World publication)

To my surprise, I enjoyed the first Forge World Horus Heresy book, ‘Betrayal’, very much – arguably, more than I’ve enjoyed a few of the Black Library Horus Heresy novels. At the time, the only other book available in the series was ‘Massacre’, and I bought it as soon as I finished ‘Betrayal’. 

GET A LOAD OF THIS SHIT! Part II

As before, the first half is ‘fluff’ (lore) and the second half is ‘crunch’ (rules). I’ll be focusing on the first half, since I don’t care too much about tabletop gaming anymore (and for all the crazy money I’ve sunk into my HH fandom, I will NOT begin a Horus Heresy-era army – that is where I draw the line). Like with ‘Betrayal’, the ‘fluff’ part of this book is presented as a historical textbook. There are vague parts where it’s admitted that nobody really knows what happened, and also some stuff that directly contradicts Horus Heresy novels… but that’s because it’s a chronicle apparently collated by one unnamed scribe on Terra (well, it’s attributed to an ‘A.K.’, so I guess today was a good day… groan), apparently writing long after the Heresy, based on first-hand or second-hand accounts from the survivors of these events. I really, really appreciate the length that Alan Bligh and co. have gone to in order to make these books immersive and faithful to the tone of the novel series, as well as informative and ‘neutral’.

Funnily enough, this focuses on the Dropsite Massacre of Isstvan V. The first few pages are kind of a ‘previously in the Horus Heresy…’ recap. This was a little worthless in my eyes, because who’s gonna buy just ONE of these series? It’s safe to assume people who bought this have heard all they need to hear about the events on Isstvan III. A page for a recap would be fine, but this goes back to pre-Unity! Ahh well, I didn’t mind reading it again. Having said that though there is a nice bonus here: a timeline which definitively presents events of the tail end of the Great Crusade and the beginning of the Heresy in chronological order. (Did you know that Alpharius only assumed command of the Alpha Legion three years before Kurze destroyed Nostramo? I didn’t!)

Once this part of the background is done, there’s an exhaustive account of the Isstvan V engagement, beginning with the first Loyalist ship of the Retribution Force to enter the system (a Raven Guard vessel, incidentally) and ending with Ferrus Manus’ death and the cease of the ‘formal’ military engagement. If you think ‘Fulgrim’ and ‘The First Heretic’ told you all you need to know about this engagement, you can probably skip this section of the book. But if, like me, you feel those books’ accounts (while great) only scratched the surface of one of the most significant and brutal fights in Imperial history, you’ll enjoy reading this much more dry, ‘factual’ account. Just because it takes a different approach to narrative, doesn’t mean ‘Massacre’ isn’t just as good at building tension and describing the horror of Isstvan V.
TEXT FOR DAYS SON, TEXT AND TEXT AND TEXT

This account takes in the key moments of this action, through the initial forays into the system showing that the Traitor naval presence seems to have unaccountably disappeared, to discussing the pervading confusion and anger at the command level in the Loyalist forces trying to make sense of what was happening (Horus must be mad, or under the thrall of some horrible xenos parasite; Horus the prideful bastard is trying to carve out his own Empire), to the Loyalists’ fateful decision to not wait for the rest of their force and make planetfall immediately, through to the eventual horror of the Iron Hands as they encounter the ‘changed’ Emperor’s Children up close for the first time, taking in the way the Sons Of Horus literally treated the Army units in their command as cattle and drove them against the First Wave with long barbed whips, and more obscure stuff like the suicidal ‘grudgematch’ between the Legio Arturus and Legio Mortis Titans. Whew, what a long-ass sentence. I must have been reading a Forge World book.

Even beyond this there are some gorgeous illustrations, including a two-page system map of Isstvan, as well as extra bits that nicely play with the ‘historical textbook’ format: testimony from a Raven Guard on his experiences in landing in the First Wave and a transcript of the interrogation of a captured Word Bearer. You really get a feeling here of how catastrophically the Death Guard, Emperor’s Children, World Eaters and Sons Of Horus are mauled in the first part of the battle, something I feel hasn’t come across in the HH novels. The first wave may have died in droves but they gave back as good as they got. And then, of course, the horror of the Dropsite Massacre itself. I could read another ten novels set in/around this time; it feels like there are thousands more stories to be told. The final ‘butcher’s bill’ – over 200,000 Space Marines dead, including both Traitor and Loyalist. Pour some out.
SPACE MOTHERFUCKER

Before we get to the ‘meat’ of new Legion backgrounds, there’s a small section on each of the First Four Traitor Legions – an overview of their actions in the Dropsite Massacre, an account of a significant figure in their ranks and some nice background/illustration of some vehicles. I didn’t really find the Emperor’s Children or World Eaters sections too noteworthy, but I really liked the other two; for example, we learn that following the drastic weakening of their armoured divisions in the Isstvan III battle, the Death Guard were forced to deploy reserve armour for Isstvan V’s engagement. These reserve forces also took a severe beating, and as a result, the Legion’s overall ability to deploy armour during the Heresy was dramatically reduced. And what was the role of the former Luna Wolves in the battle? Horus was cautious with his own Legion, probably because of the huge casualties they took on Isstvan III – he knew he needed to preserve his Legion’s strength as much as possible for the upcoming long war. Therefore the 16th mostly deployed on the defensive until the second wave revealed their allegiance and the outcome of the battle was clear, at which point Horus lead from the front and joined in the massacre.

With that out of the way, we move on to the four Legions covered here. Apologies, but for a lot of people (especially those who read the White Dwarf Index Astartes articles back in the day) you’ll already know a lot of this… but most of it was new to me.

The Iron Hands: I always held the Iron Hands as my least favourite Legion. They seemed to have the arrogance and perfectionism of the Emperor’s Children and the brutality and contempt for human life of the World Eaters, but while those Legions were damned for their weaknesses and suffered severely for them, the Hands always seemed to have their failings treated as virtues by GW and the fandom in general; I found Iron Hands evangelists irritating on a level that Ultramarines fans can only dream of reaching. I think perhaps not liking Ferrus Manus as a character in ‘Fulgrim’ or ‘Feat Of Iron’, or in fact most Iron Hands characters as they’ve been portrayed in HH fiction, may also have been a factor. (Shout out to John French’s ‘Riven’, though, that’s a really good one.)

In their early years of Terran campaigning, the Iron Hands recruited from all over the world, but most significantly from Old Albia, which was also a heavy recruiting ground for the Death Guard, and I am guessing is meant to be located in the region of the modern-day Britain (Albia, Albion… maybe?). They quickly gained a reputation for relentless, well-coordinated ground war with heavy armoured support. The reunification with their Primarch came quickly, but it was not a smooth one: the proud and intractable nature of both Manus and his new Legion meant that clashes were inevitable, but most of the ‘Iron Tenth’ quickly became fanatically loyal. As well as a firmness of ethos, another important aspect Manus brought with him to reshape the Legion was the resource of Medusa’s ancient and sophisticated technology. The Iron Hands culture became tightly interwoven with that of the Mechanicum, and the tech-literate but otherwise quite savage tribal culture of Medusa informed all aspects of what the Legion became – especially their unique makeup of nearly autonomous ‘Clans’ of Astartes, all of which competed for resources and the favour of their Primarch.
These hands be straight iron, yo

Probably my favourite part of this background was the ‘what if?’ questions raised by it. Manus was highly intolerant of any perceived failure and his punishments were harsh and absolute. Sounds bit like Perturabo, doesn’t it? His Legion gained a reputation for tactlessness and, sometimes, hostility towards its Imperial Army allies or even other Legions. To Manus’ closeness to Horus and Fulgrim, his apparent callousness and implied willingness to harshly punish or even kill his own sons, add the fact that there was at one time a growing Lodge presence in the Iron Hands, and consider how differently things could have gone. Maybe if the Lodges had been associated more strongly with Horus than Lorgar (who Manus apparently had little regard for; see ‘First Heretic’) or if Fulgrim’s overture hadn’t been so badly done, or the Isstvan betrayal had been delayed by a few years… maybe Ferrus would have come down on a different side.

This part of the book was basically all I needed to make a complete U-turn on my dislike for the Iron Hands. They are actually one of the most interesting Legions if approached in the right way. In fact there is material here for a good few very rewarding Horus Heresy short stories (or a pretty hefty novel): a pre-Heresy account of the bitter competition of Clan lords trying to excel, or an in-depth retelling of the council that took place on Medusa following Ferrus Manus’ death in an attempt to decide the Legion’s course of action. And after the great ‘Riven’ I’d love John French to write a book about the dark paths that the most unstable X Legion soldiers take following the death of their father. After all, there were apparently a significant amount of Iron Hands who never even mustered for Isstvan, maybe as many as 30,000 – and that doesn’t even take into account the broken survivors who managed to get off-world. In the past I’ve felt the last couple years of Horus Heresy books had featured the Iron Hands too prominently, but now I think they’re still a rich seam to mine for the HH series; I’m glad that this (and ‘The Damnation Of Pythos’) have opened my eyes to that.

(And I’ve got Chris Wraight’s ‘Wrath Of Iron’ waiting on my bookshelf – looking forward to diving into that one.)

The Night Lords: Following AD-B’s ‘Prince Of Crows’, and the flashback sequences in his Night Lords trilogy, I felt like I had more of a grasp on the Heresy-era Night Lords culture than almost any other Legion: their gallows humour, their casual (almost… entitled) attitude to cruelty and their strange pride in their awful shithole of a homeworld. Plus, I wasn’t too keen on re-reading Night Haunter’s origin story AGAIN. But I was being unfair – there is much more to the Night Lords that Aaron didn’t touch on.

The VIII Legion was born in the giant prison-sinks beneath Terra; subterranean cities of criminals which never saw natural light and with a fairly unpleasant way of life. Rather than drawing from the criminals, the Emperor instead took recruits from the children born in these prison cities; inmates who’d committed no crimes, children who’d grown up in a sunless world and a crime-filled environment where life was cheap. Probably the Terran and Nostraman Night Lords had the easiest ‘culture merge’ ever.

As we know, the Night Lords were something of a ‘terror weapon’; when an enemy (or ally) committed a crime that went beyond simple defiance, when the Emperor wanted to send a clear message of “that shit won’t be tolerated!”, he sent the VIII. This section talks about the Night Lords’ “tendency to moral absolutism”, something I think has been captured particularly well by Aaron. The Night Lords’ attitude to ‘guilt’ reminds me of Robot Santa from Futurama. “Thugs beating up a shopkeeper for not paying protection money… naughty! Shopkeeper not paying his protection money… equally naughty!” This early section about Legion ethos might be the best-written part of the book. Here’s my favourite quote: “Perhaps memory is too kind, perhaps we wish to believe that there is a nobility in such monsters, where in fact there is only horror. Perhaps we wish there to be a purpose behind atrocity, otherwise how could such creatures be suffered to live?”

I feel like I’ve read more than enough about Kurze’s rise to power, but I really appreciated the description of Nostraman society as it stood when the Primarch arrived on the world. I also really appreciate the discussion of how deeply Nostraman culture came to influence the Legion’s structure; it was probably a bad idea that control of these thousands of sadistic super-soldiers was given to bored foppish nobles and low-level Mafia ‘enforcers’ who’d watched Scarface too many times. (Well, basically grown up in ‘Scarface’ plus ‘The Sopranos’ times ‘Mad Max’, but, you catch my drift). The short but sweet characterisations of the Kyroptera (like Kurze’s Mournival, or maybe his consiglieres) and the Atrementar of the First Company (the Night Lords’ secret police and enforcers… but with Terminator armour) really added to the Legion flavour.

Unlike with the X Legion, I really liked the Night Lord character/vehicle gallery. Especially the one for Uros Kastax, just check this shit out: “Known to have participated… in the Yoggoth Genocides, the Fall Of The Lords Of Ephrath and… the Succoth Perfidy.” How much HP Lovecraft can you take? Plus, it’s heavily implied that this guy’s squadmates used the Dropsite Massacre as an opportunity to shoot Kastax in the back. That’s the Night Lords way, summed up in one character. (Also nicely embodied by Talon-Master Vibius, a sergeant who took advantage of the chaos of Isstvan V to kill those standing in the way of him assuming control of his entire company.)

Like I said before, I didn’t think there was any juice left to wring out of the Night Lords blood orange, but Forge World managed it. Damn.

Salamanders: For my first few years of fandom, my attitude to Vulkan’s sons was “who the fuck are the Salamanders?” Then during my last years of being a young, enthusiastic 40K fan, the Third War For Armageddon happened, where Games Workshop heavily pushed the Salamanders as an alternative to Blood Angels and Ultramarines. I was a big fan… initially. Since I started reading Horus Heresy stuff, the XVIII seemed a bit… dull. Dull as dishwater, in fact. Maybe it didn’t help that the writer who apparently has their writing privileges locked down is one I don’t really find enjoyable to read. I appreciated their altruistic outlook, and the noble attitude they had towards their role in the Imperium, but that was it. Once again, it fell to Forge World to show me the error of my ways.

The origin of all the Legions were shrouded in secrecy, but apparently that of the Salamanders was even more so; they were closely linked to the Space Wolves and the Alpha Legion in their early recruitment stages and initial deployments. One can assume that the Emperor had very specific skillset or task in mind for these three. Or maybe there was another reason. The XX Legion is involved, so we will probably never know.

But wait, the friendly and noble Salamanders aren’t anything like the savage, almost-mutant Space Wolves or the sneaky, multi-skilled Alpha Legion, right? Actually, before Vulkan was reunited with his Legion, there was a pretty heavy darkness to these guys. Even in 40K, Salamanders are known for their stubbornness and almost suicidal willingness to take on impossible odds to protect the Imperium. Back in the Great Crusade, though, this was less ‘suicidal bravery’ and more just ‘suicidal’. They were willing to spend their lives in thousands to complete their mission, and from this section, it looks like could have ended up with the fighting style of the Iron Warriors or even World Eaters if their Primarch hadn’t been a stabilising influence. Speaking of which, between the Emperor discovering Vulkan and Vulkan taking command of his Legion, there was apparently a gap of several years where Vulkan fought at the Emperor’s side. I’d love to see some more information about that, perhaps in an HH novel flashback. I really like the section on how Vulkan’s introduction of the Promethean Cult, in particular, grounded his Legion and gave them purpose and direction for their dangerous bravery, and also stopped them from falling prey to the Lodges.
Pretty amazing...

I want to mention that the ‘gallery’ section for the Salamanders is particularly nice; it’s in the nature of the Legion to create ornate, beautiful armour and Forge World really outdid themselves portraying that. And their exemplary battle is… fucking hell. If you like the Salamanders, you should read about that battle. If you don’t like the Salamanders, you should also read about that battle. Overall, I’m not as completely reversed in my position on the Salamanders as I am with the Iron Hands… but I do find them way more interesting after reading this. Almost enough to buy those Nick Kyme 40K Salamanders books. Almost.

The Word Bearers: With ‘The First Heretic’, ‘Betrayer’, ‘Aurelian’ and most recently ‘The Purge’ dealing extensively with the culture of the Word Bearers and their long road to Heresy, I went into this section with a fairly cynical attitude. After all, how much more could I learn about this Legion? Not to sound like a broken record, but more than I expected, as it turned out.
Argel Tal: "Screw you chumps and chumpettes, I'm catching the next pimpmobile out of here."

In the first days of the XVII Legion, they recruited solely from the sons of the Emperor’s defeated enemies, and were taught about the value of the Emperor’s mercy, the importance of redemption, and that one should go to any lengths to bring the Imperial Truth to the unenlightened. If the ‘Catholic Space Nazis’ meme about the Imperium holds true, the Word Bearers were the Catholic-est. But even the Church changes its doctrine when needs must. When Lorgar returned to his Legion, he began to convert the more iconoclastic Word Bearers to his belief that the Emperor was a God. Once these influential Legionaries fell, the path of the Legion was assured… until Monarchia, that is. While we know the background of this Legion well, Bligh writes elegantly about this period and gives us a fresh perspective rather than just rehashing Aaron.

I liked the way the role of the Chaplains in the Legion was fleshed out, and I enjoyed the dark hints that the Word Bearer Apothecaries were harvesting the gene-seed of any and all Legions at the Dropsite Massacre.
Those Word Bearer marine portraits are pretty beautiful (good luck painting the intricate extracts from the Book Of Lorgar onto your squads of Terminators, nerd). Hell, I don’t really have much to say because through my reviews, I feel like I’ve talked about the Word Bearers so much already… but this section of the book lives up to the standard set by the coverage of the previous three Legion.
HELL YEAH WE GOT TANKS
Then there’s a little bit of info on the Titan Legion, the Legio Atarus AKA the Firebrands, who held a resentment for the authority of Mars’ Fabricator-Genereal and a grudge against Horus for his poor use of them in one of his campaigns, and by these circumstances escaped becoming traitors. (That sells them a bit short, I guess, but I don’t really care for Titan Legions anyway.) Then we’re on to the rules, which I won’t spend much time on. First there’s a framework for a Dropsite Massacre campaign, which looks horrendously complicated. Like I said I didn’t care much about the rules as I knew I would probably never use them, but they’re worth a read anyway as there’s still some nice background information there like, especially in the unit descriptions. For example, it’s in the Rules section we learn that only the Sons Of Horus were able to field the Alpha Legion-designed ‘Banestrike’ ammunition (designed to pierce power armour) in any significant numbers. The rest went to Alpharius’ lot. We also get updates for the ‘Betrayal’ Legions, giving them new special rules, special characters, rites of war and units. The Red Butchers, a brilliantly dark World Eater unit of utterly insane warriors in Terminator armour that can be immobilised remotely by their comrades once battle is done – it’s the only way to get them to stop killing. The most significant in ‘fluff’ terms are the Kakophoni, the proto-Noise Marines of Marius Vairosean who the III Legion first fielded on Isstvan V... but by the time I got to the army lists for the four ‘Massacre’ Legions, I just couldn’t get very excited about any of it. I know some dudes buy these specifically to geek down over the Primarch stat-lines and resolve their long-running arguments over whether Ferrus Manus could have beaten Horus in single combat, but I find those people as baffling as, well, as baffling as most people find my own reasons for buying this.
You can also find rules for the VIII Legion Terror Squad, a unit headed up by a Big Punisher who's known to pack a Mac in the back of the Ac.

So how does ‘Massacre’ stack up to its predecessor? I honestly think it’s better in every way, and keep in mind that ‘Betrayal’ featured three of my favourite Legions – the Sons Of Horus, Emperor’s Children and Death Guard (not that I’m not fond of the World Eaters as well). My only real complaint from ‘Betrayal’ has been dealt with – no longer are there pages two-thirds dominated by images of Forge World vehicles and units with a faded sepia filter. There are still some of them in effect, but they’re much smaller and more judiciously deployed. (Well, the ‘giant space filler’ stuff does still happen a bit, but mainly in the rule section, where you’re going to get a fair amount of ‘dead space’ anyway due to the nature of stat/rule sheets.) Furthermore, the ‘staged’ images with Forge World models are overall of a much higher quality and tend to be in vivid colour rather than all bleached out. Just look at some of those Dropsite shots. On top of that, the introduction of black and white ‘sketches’ of Astartes units (generally special characters) in the Rule section is a brilliant idea; it’s suited perfectly to the rather dour monastic tone of the book. Jesus, look what an evil bastard Sevatar looks; with that sneer, I half-expect the picture to tell me to go get my fucking shinebox. The quality of these sketches got even higher in ‘Extinction’ – here there are a few questionable choices, but overall they’re pretty great. The illustrations of Legionaries have also been changed in format slightly. Unlike in Book 1 where you would get four pictures of Astartes per page and a few sentences about each, they’ve decided instead to have one, much larger, picture of a Legionary and his gear, and several paragraphs of background. The increased depth (and larger image size) are a great idea and while it doesn’t feel like you quite get the ridiculous scope that ‘Betrayal’ gave you (with, say, three Legionaries per Legion rather than sixteen), it’s overall a much better approach. While they look amazing some of these didn’t really live up to their potential for me. I feel like Bligh and co. have a gift for writing ‘big picture’ lore that doesn’t necessarily translate to inventing compelling characters (I really didn’t get anything from the Iron Hands heroes/vehicles section, for example).
Calas Typhon. He looks like a former Premier League footballer... Which one? ANY ONE.

And of course, we have the age-old Forge World/Black Library/Games Workshop question: does this seem to have been proof-read? In this case, yes. There are a few instances of typos, (“death-throws” rather than “death-throes”, “the remaining populous” rather than “remaining populace”) but less than I seem to recall in book 1.


‘Massacre’ is about as close to perfect as any book in this format is going to get. The only thing stopping it from being a perfect 10 is that, well, about half the book is much less interesting to me than the other half. I know it’s a little unfair to penalise it for that but I can’t help but wish there were 100 or so more pages of lore. I still feel it’s prohibitively expensive – publish it in paperback for £30, £70 is obscene – but I won’t factor that in to my score this time. And so I give this 9/10.

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Sunday, 13 October 2013

"The Unremembered Empire" by Dan Abnett

'The Unremembered Empire' is, on balance, probably the least impressive book Dan Abnett has contributed to the Horus Heresy series. It's arguably also an incredibly necessary one.
OMG SPOILERS.
Now, 'least impressive' seems like stark terms to describe a book by one of my favourite authors, but like my opinion of his short story 'Blood Games', just because I feel it's nowhere near as good as the others, doesn't make it bad, by any definition. Dan's the victim of his previous track record here. 'Horus Rising' started the ball rolling and we've probably all got very fond memories of it. 'Legion' is seen by many as the pinnacle of the entire series and I definitely agree that it's a masterpiece. 'Prospero Burns' is probably my favourite work of Space Marine fiction ever, in HH or outside of it. 'Know No Fear' is incredible and I doubt we'll see any subsequent book in the series able to sustain its intensity; even the Siege of Terra will probably be spread out across several books. In comparison, 'The Unremembered Empire' just doesn't stack up. Perhaps my expectations were too high but Dan was four-for-four until now, which might be why I pre-ordered this in hardback and finished reading it less than 24 hours after I ripped the cardboard packaging open.

Let me explain why I'm using the word 'necessary'. While many HH Abnett books (and also quite a few HH books from other authors) are better and more enjoyable than 'Unremembered Empire', they don't always give us this much narrative thrust. From 'Legion' and 'Prospero Rising' we got a shitload of incredibly interesting background, but in terms of plot points that were relevant to the larger series, only a few (OK, it was a BIG ONE for 'Legion'...). I know I've said in the past that people who want to shove the narrative forwards, and have no patience for 'world-building' interludes, are what is killing the Horus Heresy series. But sometimes it is a good thing for a book to be overcrowded with significant events - it won't necessarily be too great to read, but subsequent books will build on its revelations and, given more space, they'll be able to put more detail and art into what we first read. Like 'Galaxy In Flames'. I wouldn't say I enjoyed that book at all, but the events and characters have been used as a foundation for much more interesting stories by a lot of authors in HH series.

'The Unremembered Empire' is a follow-up to the events of 'Know No Fear', the 'Mark Of Calth' anthology, and 'Betrayer'. What transpired in those books shapes the story here, though don't expect to see a return of characters like Ventanus, Lorgar, Angron, Kharn, Kor Phaeron, Tetrarch Nicodemus, etc - it's more like, this centres on a Guilliman incredibly scarred by the monstrous events of Calth and the Shadow Crusade, and haunted by fears for the sons he left to fend for themselves in the Underworld War, which began over two years ago. However, in terms of stories and characters being picked up, 'Unremembered Empire' is a follow-up to... so many things. Most significantly, 'Vulkan Lives', but it also draws on 'The Lion', 'Rules Of Engagement', 'The Iron Within', 'Prince Of Crows', and 'The Crimson Fist'. And I'm not saying you get a brief glimpse of one character from each of these stories as 'fan service' and then they're never mentioned again. Dan does his best to integrate all these storylines naturally into his own. It's a massive task and he manages it very well; at no point was I thinking "You're here? But why?" A plot-heavy book, tying together a lot of the diverging storylines which have been left dangling or vanished in previous books, may well be exactly what the Horus Heresy series needs right now. However, the combination of all these different storylines comes at the expense of a lot of the things that made the previous Dan books so great: a clearly defined and fast-moving narrative, lashings of gallows humour, excellent dialogue, superb action sequences. All these things are THERE, certainly, but... less than I'd like. Power struggles and squabbling between Loyalist legions seems like a meaty topic Dan could really get his teeth into... so I'm not sure what happened.

My first, and most petty, complaint is that the cover of the book is misleading (this isn't exactly Dan's fault, I know). I mean, correct me if I'm wrong, but that's Guilliman and Sanguinius, right? Yet Sanguinius makes no appearance until the end of the book, making this cover an actual spoiler (since it depicts an event which is literally a couple pages from the end of the book). DANG YOU BLACK LIBRARY! You made me think Sanguinius was going to be a major character here!

The lengthy introduction of this book is a bit of a slog, I won't dress it up. At first, I thought a novel entirely about Roboute Guilliman playing politician while slowly losing his mind would be a fun time. What can I say, sometimes I love it when series totally de-rail and also piss off their more inflexible fans. (For this reason, I also love the Star Wars Rogue Squadron book 'The Krytos Trap', which pauses a series about dramatic, high-stakes starfighter dogfights to... tell the story of a lengthy, politically motivated court case.) But this book drags a little. For a lot of the story setup, Guilliman and co. are just sitting around, going stir crazy, wondering what's going on at Terra, and arguing amongst themselves about the direction 'Imperium Secundus' will take. (The difficult second album, eh? It was doomed to be poorly received.) This is topped off by Guilliman seemingly having to convince himself constantly that he's not secretly hoping to usurp his Emprah, and thinking about the temptation to do that A LOT. This whole storyline does certainly shed light on his comments at the end of 'Rules Of Engagement' though. You can't accuse these HH dudes of not planning ahead!

While not every scene is gripping stuff, the actual writing is excellent; an early highlight is a brutal fight between Guilliman and a ten-strong kill squad of Astartes, one of the best action sequences in the series, outside, well, 'Know No Fear'. Guilliman's heightened reactions and superhuman ability to calculate the current 'practical' make this one of the best uses of on-page 'bullet time' (for want of a better phrase) I've ever read. But much of the first half of 'Unremembered Empire' is just... setup. Characters and events being manouvred into place, slightly clumsily, for when the plot can finally kick into gear. 'Vulkan Lives' felt like it followed the same school of thought - pages 0-200 set 'em up, pages 200-400 knock 'em down - and that wasn't my particular favourite book either. Having said that, around the time of the Lion's arrival, and the near-simultaneous arrival of John Grammaticus (and... some others) things do finally step up in pace. Sluggishly at first, but the feeling of quickly-increasing tension is very well done. It's just a shame we're nearly 200 pages in before the shit starts flyin'. And then, when the action starts, the problems don't exactly stop, though the book certainly becomes much more enjoyable.
SHIT JUST GOT REAL (pg. 200)
There were a few odd choices made in the writing of this book. In place of Abnett's trademark biting down-to-earth wit, the dialogue seems oddly stilted and... Shakespearean. Weirdly, it works very well. I wonder if it's because some people felt 'Know No Fear' showed the Ultramarines being too 'normal' in their speech? I'd much rather have that style as Dan is superb at it, but I can't deny that the more ornate language fits in with the 'family tragedy' theme the book has. Another strange thing is that Abnett sometimes refers to single Astartes as plural ("the Ultramarines sat with his feet up, eating an ice-cream sandwich" "the Dark Angels was an expert at karaoke"). Is this how they're meant to be referred to? Or a search-and-replace spellcheck gone wrong?

Also, there's a chronology issue I'm hella confused by. 'Vulkan Lives' ends with Vulkan escaping Kurze and teleporting to Macragge. This teleportation happens very near the beginning of 'Unremembered Empire'. 'Prince Of Crows' begins with Kurze in a coma after being badly wounded by the Lion; he's in a coma for most of the story, which ends with him teleporting onto the Lion's flagship. We're told in 'Unremembered Empire' that he ran amok on the flagship for around three months and is still loose down there when the Lion comes to Macragge. So... 'Vulkan Lives' takes us right up to the beginning of 'Unremembered Empire' in terms of Kurze's actions. And 'Prince Of Crows' and the Lion's exposition do the same... but the two timelines don't reconcile in my head. The only way I can understand it is if the entirety of 'Prince Of Crows' plus another 3 months transpired in the apparently split-second gap between Vulkan thumbing Dawnbringer's teleportation switch and Vulkan appearing in Macragge's atmosphere. I suppose that's not impossible, with the nature of time being famously fluid in the 40K universe... but I'd like a little bit more explanation on this... I'm sure they'll clear it up eventually (or maybe they'll just say "Ahriman is responsible"). Just like the timeline fuckery in 'The Outcast Dead', this didn't have any impact in my actual enjoyment of the story; in fact I only realised the weirdness after I'd finished the book. But you know, that's gonna make SOMEONE pretty angry... someone out there. 40K nerds seem VERY hot on this shit.
HH chronology confusion? The chickens are coming home to roost, y'all.
So the 'day-to-day running of a new Empire' aspect of the book is something of a non-starter. It sort of feels like Abnett could have dealt interestingly with the plot of the first third or so of this book as a novella, and then the high-octane action stuff could have been handed off to a Gav Thorpe or a James Swallow. However, that would cut out perhaps the most interesting plot point here: the troubled relationship between Guilliman and Lion El'Johnson. A Primarch groupie such as myself is always on the lookout for expansion of these characters and Abnett certainly delivers in that regard. Their rivalry is presented in a way that makes it easy to be sympathetic to both sides. Part of Guilliman's great unease at the Lion's presence is not knowing how his brother will react to the overturning of the edict of Nikaea. Yet we already know from the novella 'The Lion' that Johnson has gone far further in acting against their father's anti-psyker rule than Roboute had even dreamed of. This is just one of many plot points that reinforce the fact these two brothers just can't talk to each other maaaan. The increasingly tense confrontations that they have in this book make you wish that any other Loyalist Primarch had been the first to answer Macragge's call.

Does 'Unremembered Empire' feature the tragic infamy and mind-breakingly huge battles of 'Betrayer'? Is it a fast-paced page-turner like 'Angel Exterminatus'? Is it an edge-of-your-seat masterwork of storytelling like 'Know No Fear'? Is it an uncomplicated, ceramite-splintering romp that requires almost no effort to enjoy like 'Fear To Tread'? No fucking way. But it does seem a hell of a setup. With Kurze still at large on Macragge, with Vulkan... possibly... not being dead, with the three loyalist brothers here consolidating their power, and with John Grammaticus' story taking a new and strange turn, it definitely sets things up nicely for the next few books. But I'm hoping that for his next chapter in the HH saga, Abnett doesn't bite off more than he can chew.

In my ideal world, he'd return to writing about the Sons Of Horus ('Little Horus' really piqued my interest in Abnett writing about those dudes again) but if this book tells me anything, it's that it might be a good idea for Dan to be given a new Legion to write about every time he does a book, as this is the first time he's 'returned' to a Legion he's already written about and it sometimes seems like he's a little... bored. So... remnant Iron Hands, or perhaps the Death Guard, could be a nice idea... but hell, it's probably a little early for all this - I'm sure we've got several more volumes to come before we get another Dan HH novel. Since Gaunt's Ghosts and the Eisenhorn/Ravenor sagas are getting better and better, maybe he should focus on those for a while... and considering how good 'Embedded' was, non-Black Library fiction by him would be just as interesting to me.

I will give 'Unremembered Empire' 7/10 for now. 8/10 is a strong possibility the more I think about it, but we'll see. Depending on how the setup in this book is actually utilised, perhaps I'll look back on this as the foundation for something great. Or perhaps as another slightly disappointing HH book, from an author who can do much better.

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"Vulkan Lives" by Nick Kyme

I'll be honest, I was actually dreading 'Vulkan Lives'. With my enthusiasm for AD-B and Abnett's new Heresy projects reaching boiling point, and the knowledge that a White Scars book is finally in the pipeline gettin' me pretty hot and bothered as well, 'Vulkan Lives' was a bit of a hump in the release schedule that I wanted to get over with. See, I hadn't really enjoyed much of the Nick Kyme stuff I'd read before - although to be fair that had only been a short story or two, I think. I thought he was one of Black Library's boring 'middle ground' writers. Not as unimaginitive as the worst ones, but also less willing to take risks than the best. So... was I right?
WHYYYYYYYYYY FATHERRRRRR?
While short stories have been written about the Sallies in the Heresy, and they've appeared in some form in a couple novels, they haven't got much love as central characters. Apparently, though, if you're a big fan of theirs Kyme has already written a trilogy of 40K-era Salamanders novels. I'd imagine that like the great 40K-era Night Lords trilogy, this probably has some musings about the Chapter's Heresy-era past. Myself, I already knew enough about the Salamanders to know they weren't really 'my thing'. Along with the Raven Guard, the Salamanders are really the most humane and likeable of the Primogenitor Legions. I guess the fact both chapters are devastated at Isstvan is a symbol that THE TIME FOR INNOCENCE IS OVER AND SHIT. Writing your book about a likeable, humane Legion can perhaps get you pretty far when your readers have been inundated with books about slavering berserkers, pious shitheads with icebergs wedged in their assholes and straight up blind fucking idiots (and that's just the loyalists...). See the good-but-not-amazing 'Deliverance Lost', which I really enjoyed simply because it was a real novelty to be actually rooting for the 'good guys'. However, unlike Corax's chilly tactical genius with a heart of gold, Vulkan is a bit more of a bland prospect as a character. Like his Legion, he's a bit of a workhorse. Unimaginitive, plodding, and unambiguously good.
Vulkan's just happy to be here.
To give a brief overview of the story, there are a few major plot strands. Vulkan, presumed dead on Isstvan V, is actually in Conrad Kurze's klutches, imprisoned in a non-Euclidean dungeon onboard his flagship. Holy shit, this is the mysterious labyrinth Perturabo mentioned in 'Angel Exterminatus'! Just another reason why I loved that book, it was full of allusions (and illusions?) to plots old and new in HH. Naturally Kurze has some diabolical shit planned. To quote Clifford Smith: "torture, motherfucker, what!" Determined to physically and psychologically break his brother, Kurze puts the Nocturnean through a series of harrowing ordeals. I guess it's really for the best that Kurze has captured him: a less sick (or perhaps just a more... clever) traitor Primarch would just shorten Vulkan by a head and toss him on the corpse-heap with Ferrus Manus. OR WOULD HE? OR (for that matter) COULD HE?? Still, this leaves another Primarch alive for us to wonder about their ultimate fate (Vulkan's post-Isstvan career is quite murky in the canon, though Kyme reassures us in the afterword that GW always had it established even if it wasn't written down).

Meanwhile, on the world Traoris, Word Bearers are up to their standard fuckery, trying to uncover some holy Imperial artefact (or possibly an unholy Chaos artefact) for their own awful purposes. Standing in their way is a lone Cabal agent and a rag-tag group of Isstvan survivors. Hey, I bet you guys forgot all about the Cabal!! Both Vulkan in his prison and the Salamanders on Traoris frequently have flashbacks to the Great Crusade and the events of Isstvan V. This patchwork approach sometimes gets super fucking annoying, like Kyme is trying to make 'Chronicles Of Riddick' into 'Memento'...

OK, time to be a bit mean. A big problem with 'Vulkan Lives' is that it's haunted by spectres of other books. It's fair to say that 'Legion' is fondly remembered as an early highlight of the series by many, and some put it as the best Horus Heresy book ever (slightly depressing, as it was like the sixth one in the series). Nothing since then has really covered a similar concept and those 'Legion' fanboys are getting somewhat restless. So what would you do to appease those guys? Bring back the Cabal as a central part of the storyline, and John Grammaticus with it. However, Legion was a twisty-turny mystery as much as it was a bone-crunching shoot-em-up - you were often getting the rug pulled out from under you and spending whole scenes going "who's fugging who over, here?" 'Vulkan Lives' can't compete; the twisting chronology tries to make it seem like a headfuck, but characters, their motivations and even their ultimate fates seem pretty clear from the outset. As much as John Gramm tries to mislead his companions and by extension the reader, we kind of know what the motherfucker's all about, so it just doesn't have the shock value 'Legion' had. Bonus points for slipping a 'fugging' in there though.
Oh yall finna steal my light huh? Oh word? We'll fuggin see about that.
Another book you may find yourself recalling is 'Angel Exterminatus', with its team of Raven Guard, Iron Hands and Salamanders who are living purely for vengeance and despairing at their lack of higher guidance. To be fair, I'd imagine this sort of thing is going to be in most of the HH novels from now on; it's really the only role those Legions can play now, unless Black Library have some surprises up their sleeve. Which they almost certainly do, especially regarding the Raven Guard.

As for the Word Bearers... fuck, I can't be the only one who is getting Word Bearers fatigue. Feels like these guys have been the antagonists for the last ten books or so. While I know without checking that can't truly be the case, it feels like Black Library are kind of wasting some great villains. Give us some forthright Death Guard brutality, some dark visions of how the Sons Of Horus are changing, some more Alpha Legion enigmatic...ness. And while I've kind of had my fill of the Iron Warriors as well, I'd like to see their 'Angel Exterminatus' co-stars the Emperor's Children get into some actual knock-down-drag-out fights (drag being the operative word, HEY-OHHH) rather than just, you know, sitting around getting high. Word Bearers, though... Athames, dark apostles and fuck-shit rituals; we kind of get it now, guys. Time to move on.

And, when it comes to the Night Lords, well... I'm not saying no one else can write them or anything but after the Night Lords trilogy, plus 'Prince Of Crows', you're gonna have to bring some fucking ruckus to top Dembski-Bowden's memorable scrolls on Conrad and his reavers. While he does make a great stab at it, Kyme doesn't even come close to the Kurze portrayals that AD-B's given us. I mean the boy Aaaron done give us jewels son. As for the torture/"tests" that Conrad K uses to break Vulkan, they're kind of... repetitive. Vulkan thinks he's about to escape - but he hasn't escaped. Vulkan is given the illusion of being able to save some captive humans - but they're already doomed. Vulkan thinks Ferrus Manus is talking to him - BUT FERRUS IS DEAD THOUGH!! Despite my sarcasm, I did really like the Vulkan sections. Kyme had some giant fucking balls to have his Primarch as not just a 'viewpoint' character but a first person character. We've certainly spent some time in Lorgar and Angron's heads but I don't think we've had any Primarch as a first person narrator before. I also found these sections really well written, something I couldn't necessarily say about the book as a whole. For example, I thought the Salamanders pre-Heresy flashbacks were a little... busy in their overdescription.

'Vulkan Lives' took me quite a long time to read - much longer than 'Mark Of Calth'. I did lose enthusiasm for it several times and in fact, I started re-reading the 'Song of Ice and Fire' books around the time I started 'Vulkan Lives' - and I'd nearly finished with George RR Martin's series again before I finally finished Kyme's book. That takes a lot of procrastination. Yet like 'Betrayer', 'Vulkan Lives' certainly picks up momentum towards the end and by the time I finished it I was PUMPED for the next HH book. Unlike 'Betrayer', though, getting to that point was a big struggle. Also unlike 'Betrayer' (where the ending was a perfect result of all the plot strands that had been taking you there, along with some delicious promise for future volumes), I found the ending of 'Vulkan Lives'... inconclusive. Vulkan's big secret reveal seemed badly handled, and I didn't fully grasp the nature of his father's 'gift' to him, since I always kind of assumed the Primarchs are nigh-invulnerable anyway. The only ones who died, seem to have died fighting their equally-powerful brothers who had the advantage of being suffused with the energies of Chaos or what have you. Certainly it wasn't a surprise a little punk like Kurze couldn't break the Blacksmiter... And that 'epilogue', I had to read a few times, and I still needed to go online to clear up what it meant. Aside from the final action sequence feeling a little rushed and unclear, John Grammaticus' motives, and by extension, those of the Cabal, continue to be very foggy grey, though his mission to the realm of Ultramar sounds promising - I'm guessing, a setup for him to appear in 'Unremembered Empire' and be written by Dan Abnett again (yayyyy!).

Despite the confusion (which I'm sure will disappear when I re-read this a few more times) the last third of the book or so is "a Rollicking Good Read" and features some excellently tense battle scenes. I'm also very keen to find out what becomes of Narek, the implacable Word Bearer huntsman who is cursed with a conscience (weird and twisted though it might be) and is full of doubts regarding his legion's new direction. Unfortunately, he's probably much too far gone to be the 17th's representative in Malcador's 'supergroup'...
L-R: Qruze, Rubio, Garro, Cerberus, Varren. Controversially, Rubio is dressed as Fulgrim.
I was definitely too hard on Kyme with my previous prejudice. Yes, I guess I'd put him near the middle of the Black Library pile still, but he's no Ben Counter. (Sorry Ben, but I'm still gonna use you as a watchword for all that is wack). This book is certainly equal with some of McNeill's books. In fact I think it's better than 'Thousand Sons' and 'False Gods'... I'd give this 7/10, for now. I'm glad to say this, since I was steering towards 6/10 for a lot of the book, but the last sections really turned me around.

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